Thursday, March 24, 2005

i know, i know


I was not able to do much of what I had in mind, but at least I ended finshing... err... a part of it. *grins* Well, I'll start again in a short while. Yup, just taking a break right now. Hahaha, my definition of break really is something. What, it's been 4 hours or so that I've been out of my room taking a break. If I had a job, I'd be unemployed by the end of my first day if this is how I define break.

Well, I've mentioned posting some of my stuff in here. I posted something, like a month ago, and since I don't have much to say for today, I'll just post another... something that's... uhh... something. *grins*

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The Ride

I’m not home. There is no school tomorrow. I’m outside the city.
We’re in the car. I reached for the smelly can. I put it back. I opened the window. There was a long line of trees, I don’t know how many.
I closed the window and straightened on my seat. My uncle is taking me to a theme park. There will be lots of toys and fun things to do.
I’m walking from the parking lot. I saw the moving giant wheel. I want to go there.
The big circle moved with the push of a button. I’m taller than the ruler. I’m seven. My uncle lifted me and sat beside me.
It’s very high. I held my breath. Our seat was gently swinging. My uncle’s shirt is blue. His hands are bigger than mine. He’s smiling.
I kept my eyes open. There was a long buzzer sound. The safety bar was removed.
“I can manage on my own,” I tell my uncle.


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I know it's not much. It gave me a headache when I was writing it. Sigh... I spent hours trying to come up with ideas, creative ones at that. It was for my creative writing class. I can write, but like what I said, I'm not creative.

By the way, I ended up passing another draft that I came up after this one. Yup, it was actually quite annoying. I had to sit and for hours writing this one and eventually coming up with another and deciding to pass that one. Tsk.

**myk! impluwensya mo 'to! kung poems sa'yo... fiction saken... hehehe.... *grins*



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